Greetings fellow bloggers!
On today’s post I will be sharing some of my black-hole writing!
These are my two favorite show don’t tell sentences:
Dark grey clouds blanketed the sky like a hose water sprayed heavily against the outside of the building.Β
Bling! He landed on the warmest mud ever with a bright light shiningΒ on him. He was happy until
he realized, wait a minute, this isnβt mudβ¦
Do you think I did a good job in the show don’t tell aspect of the writing.
We did this writing off of a short clip of a man putting his hand inside a black-hole after printing it on a piece of paper.
Blog you later,
Maddy.
Kia ora Maddy its Dev from rm 23 your sentences are good and i think u just need to describe them more when u post anyways have a nice day blog u later