Tag: Writing

Greetings fellow bloggers!

Today I'm going to share some of my writing!
 
This is it :

“GRANDPA OVER BOARD GRANDPA OVer… grrruge” as Grandpa sank he remembered he was half FISH and so Plop! He transformed into an old fish and swam away with CHICKEN as they flew into MOONLAND obviously they were still fish so Grandpa turned into a PELICAN(yes he is half PELICAN) and picked up CHICKEN in his bill, as Peppermint arrived the landing spot for birds a random MOON PERSON came up to check he had a arriving ticket which Grandpa did not have and so turned into a HIPPO(he is a third HIPPO) and sat on da MOON PERSON. MR MOON found out and sent Peppermint to JAIL where he was charged with MURDER of MOON PERSON named JEFF. 

CHICKEN was put into a fish bowl placed next to Grandpa Peppermint who was still figuring out how to turn back into a dragon the best he had gotten was a gecko so now he was GECKO GRANDPA! After Peppermint escaped from prison and ate MR MOON who indeed tasted like CHEESE, then he went and rescued his fish friend name of CHICKEN anyways since Peppermint had eaten MR MOON he was now KING of MOONLAND MUHAHAHAHA!

This is not all my writing but it was my favorite part.
The writing is inspired by the short film "La Luna" and for writing we guessed what happened next.

Did you enjoy reading this pat of my writing? if so why and if not why?

Blog you later, 
Maddy

Greetings fellow bloggers.

This week my class are doing The witches writing.

I was very proud of the sick sentences I fixed.

Originals : The witches went through the air. They held onto the brooms. Their skin was green.

Fixed ones: The witches sped anxiously through the purple sky. Their hands trembled as they tightened their grip clinging onto the brooms. Lightning illuminated their toad textured green faces.

Do you think I did a good job? What could I do to improve?

Blog you later,

Maddy.

 

Greetings Bloggers!

I have decided to post this specific part of my writing.

Hope you like it!

i’m BrickBoi, this is ButterflyBoi and we are drag-” the yellowy brown chimp who had a pink and yellow underbelly was cut off by a grey chimp with a rainbow underbelly who said “Monkeys!” “Oh right, not dragons monkeys.”  dragons? Larch thought until she realized she hadn’t said anything. “I’m Larch.” “cool name!” shouted BrickBoi, kinda frightening Larch and himself. “Thanks, by any chance were you in the fire that happened here a while ago?” she questioned “Yup” replied the smaller chimp named uh was it ButterBoi? 

I really like this part because i think its funny and it was the first time i used these characters.

Blog you later,

Maddy.

Today i finished my Salvation writing which is about a clan of cats and a dog named Soot.

I hope you enjoy.

With the world in ruins, they began to board the ship in hope of salvation… Soot and JuniperFang were last to board the ship but when they did the door closed and the ship took off, hovering there for a while. The ship began to fly up but was dragged down by… Twolegs!? Soot heard Juniper gasp. He suddenly felt scared, yanking Juniper closer. Soot asked Juniper to explain what was happening. Juniper started by saying “Well there are many twolegs trying to pull down the ship” she explained, “Like how many?”asked Soot, his ears pinned back. “About 46” she replied, Soot could tell she was trying to stay calm. ‘So loads of twolegs?” said Soot, “And it’s purple outside Soot!” said Juniper excitedly “oh how I wish I could see ” sighed Soot, placing his nose on his paws. A bright white light blasted down the two legs letting the ship move up. “Soot its starclan!” Juniper squealed excitedly, “Ah yes, good news at last!” Soot raised his head hearing a new voice, “who’s there?” asked Soot. “don’t worry, it’s just MistyFoot.” Soot heard Juniper say. “Oh ok” Soot said, laying his nose on his paws again, falling asleep. When he awoke they had landed, Soot felt something wrong when he exited the ship… his sniffer was broken? And he couldn’t hear out of his right ear?